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  • Ode on a Carrjacking

    Well shoot why not I guess.  I have a few pieces to share.  I haven’t written in a while (I feel like that is the customary go to line when sharing poetry that may or may not fit the bill) It isn’t that I am unsure of my writing ability, to the contrary most every time i penned something, I have been satisfied.  Just that within six months of me writing it, I would be less enthusiastic about it.  All the new stuff is sheer brilliance I tell you and all my old stuff is crap.  thing is I don’t have much in the new stuff category  but a great deal of the old.  I picked a few that I can live with.  I never was a practitioner of the abstract removed form of poetry so my personality comes across loud and clear.  Also I don’t have titles for any of my work, it never felt right for me or my work.  Another thing, I use the pen name Carrjack (my last name is Carr and Ian is the Scottish Gaelic form of John, which Jack is a common nickname) Sent them in the body of the email if that’s alright with you.

    -Ian Carr, New York, NY
    Archaeologist (Dig Supervisor, Scotland, Summer 2011)

    ———————————————————————————————————-

    We left New York
    in search of an idea
    ever fleeting
    and a need to come to terms
    with you America

    Rolling hills
    and a curving road
    our path
    is unknown
    beyond the next bend

    Drive through the night
    taking turns behind the wheel
    The poets and
    drifters strewn
    across the back seat.

    A half tank
    and cigarettes to burn
    You lay yourself out
    head in my lap
    feet on the dash

    Windows open
    the cool night sky
    passing small valley towns
    distant street lamps
    and slumbering homes

    this highway was once
    an indian trail

    switch it up
    my eyes are sagging
    Semis barreling past
    trying for a good time

    in my youth
    my father spoke
    of roads like rivers

    Take you clear across this land
    without so much as a stop sign
    before emptying out
    into the pacific

    ——————————————————————————————————-

    Dine
       Parked Cars

    Sleep
        in your
    Jeans.

    Grin
    At the
    Rising Sun.

    Always
    Drink It
       Black.

    Smoke Em
     if ya Got Em

    While Pondering the Meaning
                   of it all.

    ———————————————————————————————————

    Our Place
    was on the third floor
    on top of a hill.
    Our Eagles Nest.
    A sanctuary from
    the grime.
    We would
    sit there
    Listen to the
    screams and bottles
    break.

    Could see the
    flashing lights
    on the wall
    from those
    trying
    to keep the peace.

    We watched as
    the cretins crept
    up the hill.

    The shit
    had been
    1 block west.
    but towards the end
    it was 1 block east.

    We were
    surrounded
    on all sides.

    Pour another drink.

    And whatever you do,
    never
    lock the door.
    They’ll just bust
    a window to find
    we haven’t
    got shit
    and god knows
    we don’t have money
    for that.

    So pour it to the brim.

    and spare us both the pleasantries.

    —————————————————————————


    Keep it simple
    Don’t overthink it
    You have
    A mattress
    A pile of books
    some bought
    the rest stolen
    A closet of wrinkled clothes
    that conveniently
    fits into your grandpas
    WW II navy duffel bag
    A metrocard with 50 cents on it
    No job
    No food
    No woman
    No booze
    No credit
    A growing debt
    One year left on
    that BA
    2 close friends
    A shrinking waistline
    A manuscript of sorts
    or rather
    a collection of ramblings and
    musings
    scattered across
    scraps of paper
    and diner napkins
    With 29 years under your belt
    and no end in sight. 

    Tagged: Ian Carr New York Archaeology Archaeologist poetry Carrjack Stephanie Augello

    Posted on February 15, 2011 with 4 notes

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